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April 9, 2011
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FinePix S6500fd
1/50 second
F/2.8
6 mm
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Apr 10, 2011, 2:54:39 AM
Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
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Taken with my little old Fujifilm S6500FD on Super Macro Mode. It has a Fujinon zoom lens on it which is a f=6.2-66.7mm 1:2.8-4.9 58mm equivalent.
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Critique by *TTSnim Apr 10, 2011, 9:39:49 AM
The foreground looks a little to out of focus, and I think it needs to be sharper. The signature is distracting as well, and my eye keeps sinking to it like a rock.

I think if the signature was altered then the fuzzy foreground problem wouldn't be so bad, as the sig is SO sharp it sort of mocks the focus you do have.

Perhaps if you darkened it, underlayed it with a copy, and blurred that, then the sig would still be clearly visible, but it wouldn't compete so hard for attention.

Other than that this pic is wonderful.
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